Thursday, September 20, 2012

In Class Writing 9/20

Read the Langston Hughes essay, "Salvation".  On your own blog, make two lists: 1) a list of things you thought worked well in the essay and 2) a list of things that didn't work for you.

                                  Things that worked well:

                                           1.  That it as a good story
                                           2.  Made me want to keep reading.
                                           3.  Set the scene well 
                                           4.  Very descriptive.



                                  Things that didn't work well.

                                            1. The ending! -no it was a good ending however considering he was a child, I do wonder if he ever regained his faith?
                                             2. Author didn't really speak

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